01-05-2020, 12:09 AM
SPEECH TO THE ALDURIAN OIL WORKERS UNION IN AMAPOLA, VALORIA
A moment for the Deputy Prime Minister, largely positive, that still left much to be desired.
Your best answer was your answer on how gay people are treated in foreign countries – you staked out a position on the matter and was able to tie that into your views on the Law of Graces. These are always winning issues for you as that’s where the majority of Aldurians are. You are the first politician to comment on the treatment of gay people in other nations, so you take the lead in the messaging around the issue here.
Your original speech and many of your answers are mostly vague and full of platitudes. Your answer on the tax policy u-turn was likely the weakest, it was very stumbly and a bit nonsensical. I understand what you are trying to say, but you need to work on explaining yourself better and clearer.
It’s awkward for you to be speaking about a DSP majority government when you’re in a coalition and you’ve signed up for it willingly – there isn’t an election going on and it implies that you can’t effect change in the coalition. It sounds out of place.
This didn’t do any damage to you, but it’s not really a good speech. The silver lining is that the effort is noted - the oil workers and the DSP base do enjoy hearing you speak on their issues and that keeps them supporting you. Work on being a better and clearer messenger.
A moment for the Deputy Prime Minister, largely positive, that still left much to be desired.
Your best answer was your answer on how gay people are treated in foreign countries – you staked out a position on the matter and was able to tie that into your views on the Law of Graces. These are always winning issues for you as that’s where the majority of Aldurians are. You are the first politician to comment on the treatment of gay people in other nations, so you take the lead in the messaging around the issue here.
Your original speech and many of your answers are mostly vague and full of platitudes. Your answer on the tax policy u-turn was likely the weakest, it was very stumbly and a bit nonsensical. I understand what you are trying to say, but you need to work on explaining yourself better and clearer.
It’s awkward for you to be speaking about a DSP majority government when you’re in a coalition and you’ve signed up for it willingly – there isn’t an election going on and it implies that you can’t effect change in the coalition. It sounds out of place.
This didn’t do any damage to you, but it’s not really a good speech. The silver lining is that the effort is noted - the oil workers and the DSP base do enjoy hearing you speak on their issues and that keeps them supporting you. Work on being a better and clearer messenger.